ASSAY: A JOURNAL OF NONFICTION STUDIES
  • 11.2 (Spring 2025)
    • 11.2 Articles >
      • Megan Brown, “Quit Lit” as Neoliberal Narrative: The Nonfiction of Burnout, Self-Actualization, and the Great Resignation" (Assay 11.2)
      • Amy Cook, "Where There’s Smoke, There’s Blue Sky: The Hallmarks of 9/11’s Imagery in Prose" (Assay 11.2)
    • 11.2 Conversations >
      • Thomas Larson, "The Reader's Mental Ear" (Assay 11.2)
      • Patrick Madden, "An Open Letter to My Late Friend Brian Doyle" (Assay 11.2)
      • Rhonda Waterhouse, "Woven Craft: The Artistic Tools of Toni Jensen’s “Carry” (Assay 11.2)
    • 11.2 Pedagogy >
      • Becky Blake and Matthew J. Butler, "Avoiding Empathy Fatigue: What CNF Educators Can Learn from an Oncologist" (Assay 11.2)
      • Kelly Myers and Bruce Ballenger, "Essayism in the Age of AI" (Assay 11.2)
      • Marco Wilkinson, "Exquisite Copse" (Assay 11.2)
  • Archives
    • Journal Index >
      • Author Index
      • Subject Index
    • 1.1 (Fall 2014) >
      • Editor's Note
      • 1.1 Articles >
        • Sarah Heston, "Critical Memoir: A Recovery From Codes" (1.1)
        • Andy Harper, "The Joke's On Me: The Role of Self-Deprecating Humor in Personal Narrative" (1.1)
        • Ned Stuckey-French, "Our Queer Little Hybrid Thing" (1.1)
        • Brian Nerney, "John McCarten’s ‘Irish Sketches’: ​The New Yorker’s ‘Other Ireland’ in the Early Years of the Troubles, 1968-1974" (1.1)
        • Wendy Fontaine, "Where Memory Fails, Writing Prevails: Using Fallacies of Memory to Create Effective Memoir" (1.1)
        • Scott Russell Morris, "The Idle Hours of Charles Doss, or ​The Essay As Freedom and Leisure" (1.1)
      • 1.1 Conversations >
        • Donald Morrill, "An Industrious Enchantment" (1.1)
        • Sonya Huber, "Amazon Constellations" (1.1)
        • Derek Hinckley, "Fun Home: Change and Tradition in Graphic Memoir" (1.1)
        • Interview with Melanie Hoffert
        • Interview with Kelly Daniels
      • 1.1 Pedagogy >
        • Robert Brooke, "Teaching: 'Rhetoric: The Essay'" (1.1)
        • Richard Louth, "In Brief: Autobiography and Life Writing" (1.1)
    • 1.2 (Spring 2015) >
      • 1.2 Articles >
        • Kelly Harwood, "Then and Now: A Study of Time Control in ​Scott Russell Sanders' 'Under the Influence'" (1.2)
        • Diana Wilson, "Laces in the Corset: Structures of Poetry and Prose that Bind the Lyric Essay" (1.2)
        • Randy Fertel, "A Taste For Chaos: Creative Nonfiction as Improvisation" (1.2)
        • Lynn Z. Bloom, "Why the Worst Trips are the Best: The Comic Travails of Geoffrey Wolff & Jonathan Franzen" (1.2)
        • Ingrid Sagor, "What Lies Beside Gold" (1.2)
        • Catherine K. Buni, "Ego, Trip: On Self-Construction—and Destruction—in Creative Nonfiction" (1.2)
      • 1.2 Conversations >
        • Doug Carlson, "Paul Gruchow and Brian Turner: Two Memoirs Go Cubistic" (1.2)
        • Patrick Madden, "Aliased Essayists" (1.2)
        • Beth Slattery, "Hello to All That" (1.2)
        • Interview with Michael Martone (1.2)
      • Spotlight >
        • Richard Louth, "The New Orleans Writing Marathon and the Writing World" (1.2)
        • Kelly Lock-McMillen, "Journey to the Center of a Writer's Block" (1.2)
        • Jeff Grinvalds, "Bringing It Back Home: The NOWM in My Classroom" (1.2)
        • Susan Martens, "Finding My Nonfiction Pedagogy Muse at the NOWM" (1.2)
      • 1.2 Pedagogy >
        • Steven Church, "The Blue Guide Project: Fresno" (1.2)
        • Stephanie Vanderslice, "From Wordstar to the Blogosphere and Beyond: ​A Digital Literacy and Teaching Narrative (Epiphany Included)" (1.2)
        • Jessica McCaughey, "That Snow Simply Didn’t Fall: How (and Why) to Frame the Personal Essay as a Critical Inquiry into Memory in the First-Year Writing Classroom" (1.2)
    • 2.1 (Fall 2015) >
      • Editor's Note2.1
      • 2.1 Articles >
        • Daniel Nester, "Straddling the Working Class Memoir" (2.1)
        • Sarah M. Wells, "The Memoir Inside the Essay Collection: ​Jo Ann Beard's Boys of My Youth" (2.1)
        • Chris Harding Thornton, "Ted Kooser's "Hands": On Amobae, Empathy, and Poetic Prose" (2.1)
        • Steven Harvey & Ana Maria Spagna, "The Essay in Parts" (2.1)
        • Megan Culhane Galbraith, "Animals as Aperture: How Three Essayists Use Animals to Convey Meaning and Emotion" (2.1)
      • 2.1 Conversations >
        • Barrie Jean Borich, "Deep Portrait: On the Atmosphere of Nonfiction Character" (2.1)
        • Tim Bascom, "As I See It: Art and the Personal Essay" (2.1)
        • Adrian Koesters, "Because I Said So: Language Creation in Memoir" (2.1)
        • Interview with Simmons Buntin (2.1)
        • Mike Puican, "Narrative Disruption in Memoir" (2.1)
      • 2.1 Pedagogy >
        • Bernice M. Olivas, "Politics of Identity in the Essay Tradition" (2.1)
        • Ioanna Opidee, "Essaying Tragedy" (2.1)
        • Crystal N. Fodrey, "Teaching CNF Writing to College Students: A Snapshot of CNF Pedagogical Scholarship" (2.1)
        • W. Scott Olsen, "Teaching Adventure, Exploration and Risk" (2.1)
        • Christian Exoo & Sydney Fallon, "Using CNF to Teach the Realities of Sexual Assault to ​First Responders: An Annotated Bibliography" (2.1)
    • Special Conference Issue
    • 2.2 (Spring 2016) >
      • 2.2 Articles >
        • Micah McCrary, "A Legacy of Whiteness: Reading and Teaching Eula Biss’s Notes from No Man’s Land" (2.2)
        • Marco Wilkinson, "Self-Speaking World" (2.2)
        • Miles Harvey, "We Are All Travel Writers, We Are All Blind" (2.2)
        • Ashley Anderson, "Playing with the Essay: Cognitive Pattern Play in Ander Monson and Susan Sontag" (2.2)
        • Lawrence Evan Dotson, "Persona in Progression: ​A Look at Creative Nonfiction Literature in Civil Rights and Rap" (2.2)
      • 2.2 Conversations >
        • Julie Platt, "What Our Work is For: ​The Perils and Possibilities of Arts-Based Research" (2.2)
        • William Bradley, "On the Pleasure of Hazlitt" (2.2)
        • Jie Liu, "​'Thirteen Canada Geese': On the Video Essay" (2.2)
        • Stacy Murison, "​Memoir as Sympathy: Our Desire to be Understood" (2.2)
      • 2.2 Pedagogy >
        • Stephanie Guedet, "​Feeling Human Again: Toward a Pedagogy of Radical Empathy" (2.2)
        • DeMisty Bellinger-Delfield, "Exhibiting Speculation in Nonfiction: Teaching 'What He Took'" (2.2)
        • Gail Folkins, "Straight from the Source: ​Primary Research and the Personality Profile" (2.2)
    • 3.1 (Fall 2016) >
      • 3.1 Articles >
        • Chelsey Clammer, "Discovering the (W)hole Story: On Fragments, Narrative, and Identity in the Embodied Essay" (3.1)
        • Sarah Einstein, "'The Self-ish Genre': Questions of Authorial Selfhood and Ethics in ​First Person Creative Nonfiction" (3.1)
        • Elizabeth Paul, "​Seeing in Embraces" (3.1)
        • Jennifer M. Dean, "Sentiment, Not Sentimentality" (3.1)
      • 3.1 Conversations >
        • Interview with Robert Atwan (3.1)
        • Jody Keisner, "'Did I Miss a Key Point?': ​A Study of Repetition in Joan Didion’s Blue Nights" (3.1)
        • Julija Sukys, "In Praise of Slim Volumes: Big Book, Big Evil" (3.1)
        • Lynn Z. Bloom, "​The Great American Potluck Party" (3.1)
        • Jenny Spinner, "​The Best American Essays Series as (Partial) Essay History" (3.1)
      • 3.1 Pedagogy >
        • Heath Diehl, "​The Photo Essay: The Search for Meaning" (3.1)
        • Sonya Huber, "​James Baldwin: Nonfiction of a Native Son" (3.1)
        • Christian Exoo, "Using CNF to Teach the Realities of ​Intimate Partner Violence to First Responders: An Annotated Bibliography" (3.1)
        • John Proctor, "Teachin’ BAE: A New Reclamation of Research and Critical Thought" (3.1)
        • Richard Gilbert, "Classics Lite: On Teaching the Shorter, Magazine Versions of James Baldwin's 'Notes of a Native Son' and ​Jonathan Lethem's 'The Beards'" (3.1)
        • Dawn Duncan & Micaela Gerhardt, "The Power of Words to Build Bridges of Empathy" (3.1)
    • 3.2 (Spring 2017) >
      • 3.2 Articles >
        • Jennifer Lang, "When Worlds Collide: ​Writers Exploring Their Personal Narrative in Context" (3.2)
        • Creighton Nicholas Brown, "Educational Archipelago: Alternative Knowledges and the Production of Docile Bodies in Jamaica Kincaid’s A Small Place and Marjane Satrapi’s The Complete Persepolis" (3.2)
        • Nicola Waldron, "Containing the Chaos: On Spiral Structure and the Creation of Ironic Distance in Memoir" (3.2)
        • Charles Green, "Remaking Relations: ​Reading Ta-Nehisi Coates Beyond James Baldwin" (3.2)
        • Joey Franklin, "Facts into Truths: Henry David Thoreau and the Role of Hard Facts in ​Creative Nonfiction" (3.2)
      • 3.2 Conversations >
        • Thomas Larson, "What I Am Not Yet, I Am" (3.2)
        • Amanda Ake, "Vulnerability and the Page: Chloe Caldwell’s I’ll Tell You In Person"​ (3.2)
        • "Interview with Gail Griffin" (3.2)
        • Alysia Sawchyn, "On Best American Essays 1989" (3.2)
      • 3.2 Pedagogy >
        • D. Shane Combs, "Go Craft Yourself: Conflict, Meaning, and Immediacies Through ​J. Cole’s “Let Nas Down” (3.2)
        • Michael Ranellone, "Brothers, Keepers, Students: John Edgar Wideman Inside and Outside of Prison" (3.2)
        • Emma Howes & Christian Smith, ""You have to listen very hard”: Contemplative Reading, Lectio Divina, and ​Social Justice in the Classroom" (3.2)
        • Megan Brown, "The Beautiful Struggle: ​Teaching the Productivity of Failure in CNF Courses" (3.2)
    • 4.1 (Fall 2017) >
      • Editor's Note
      • 4.1 Articles >
        • Jennifer Case, "Place Studies: Theory and Practice in Environmental Nonfiction"
        • Bob Cowser, Jr., "Soldiers, Home: Genre & the American Postwar Story from Hemingway to O'Brien & then Wolff"
        • Sam Chiarelli, "Audience as Participant: The Role of Personal Perspective in Contemporary Nature Writing"
        • Kate Dusto, "Reconstructing Blank Spots and Smudges: How Postmodern Moves Imitate Memory in Mary Karr's The Liars' Club"
        • Joanna Eleftheriou, "Is Genre Ever New? Theorizing the Lyric Essay in its Historical Context"
        • Harriet Hustis, ""The Only Survival, The Only Meaning": ​The Structural Integrity of Thornton Wilder's Bridge in John Hersey's Hiroshima"
      • 4.1 Conversations >
        • Taylor Brorby, "​On 'Dawn and Mary'"
        • Steven Harvey, "​From 'Leap'"
        • J. Drew Lanham, "​On 'Joyas Voladoras'"
        • Patrick Madden, "On 'His Last Game'"
        • Ana Maria Spagna, "On 'How We Wrestle is Who We Are'"
      • 4.1 Pedagogy >
        • Jacqueline Doyle, "Shuffling the Cards: ​I Think Back Through Judith Ortiz Cofer"
        • Amy E. Robillard, "Children Die No Matter How Hard We Try: What the Personal Essay Teaches Us About Reading"
    • 4.2 (Spring 2018) >
      • 4.2 Articles >
        • Megan Brown, "Testimonies, Investigations, and Meditations: ​Telling Tales of Violence in Memoir"
        • Corinna Cook, "Documentation and Myth: On Daniel Janke's How People Got Fire"
        • Michael W. Cox, "Privileging the Sentence: David Foster Wallace’s Writing Process for “The View from Mrs. Thompson’s”
        • Sarah Pape, "“Artistically Seeing”: Visual Art & the Gestures of Creative Nonfiction"
        • Annie Penfield, "Moving Towards What is Alive: ​The Power of the Sentence to Transform"
        • Keri Stevenson, "Partnership, Not Dominion: ​Resistance to Decay in the Falconry Memoir"
      • 4.2 Conversations >
        • Interview with Jericho Parms (4.2)
        • "Containing the Hidden Lives of Ordinary Things: A Conversation with Seven Authors"
        • Amy Monticello, "The New Greek Chorus: Collective Characters in Creative Nonfiction"
        • Stacy Murison, "David Foster Wallace's 'Ticket to the Fair'"
        • Emery Ross, "Toward a Craft of Disclosure: Risk, Shame, & Confession in the Harrowing Essay"
      • 4.2 Pedagogy >
        • Sonya Huber, "Field Notes for a Vulnerable & Immersed Narrator" (4.2)
        • W. Scott Olsen, "In Other Words" (4.2)
    • 5.1 (Fall 2018) >
      • 5.1 Articles >
        • Emily W. Blacker, "Ending the Endless: The Art of Ending Personal Essays" (5.1)
        • Marya Hornbacher, ""The World is Not Vague": Nonfiction and the Urgency of Fact" (5.1)
        • Rachel May, "The Pen and the Needle: ​ Intersections of Text and Textile in and as Nonfiction" (5.1)
        • Jen Soriano, "Multiplicity from the Margins: The Expansive Truth of Intersectional Form" (5.1)
      • 5.1 Conversations >
        • Matthew Ferrence, "In Praise of In Praise of Shadows: Toward a Structure of Reverse Momentum" (5.1)
        • John Proctor, "Nothing Out of Something: Diagramming Sentences of Oppression" (5.1)
        • Alysia Sawchyn, "Essaying the World: ​On Tell Me How It Ends: An Essay in Forty Questions" (5.1)
        • Vivian Wagner, "Crafting Digression: Interactivity and Gamification in Creative Nonfiction" (5.1)
        • Nicole Walker, "On Beauty" (5.1)
      • 5.1 Spotlight >
        • Philip Graham, "The Shadow Knows (5.1)
        • Miles Harvey, "The Two Inmates: ​Research in Creative Nonfiction and the Power of “Outer Feeling”" (5.1)
        • Tim Hillegonds, "Making Fresh" (5.1)
        • Michele Morano, "Creating Meaning Through Structure" (5.1)
      • 5.1 Pedagogy >
        • Meghan Buckley, "[Creative] Nonfiction Novella: Teaching Postcolonial Life Writing and the ​Hybrid Genre of Jamaica Kincaid’s A Small Place" (5.1)
        • Edvige Giunta, "Memoir as Cross-Cultural Practice in Italian American Studies" (5.1)
        • Jody Keisner, "Gender Identity in Personal Writing: Contextualizing the Syllabi" (5.1)
        • Terry Ann Thaxton, "Workshop Wild" (5.1)
        • Amanda Wray, "​Contesting Traditions: Oral History in Creative Writing Pedagogy" (5.1)
    • 5.2 (Spring 2019) >
      • 5.2 Articles >
        • Nina Boutsikaris, "On Very Short Books, Miniatures, and Other Becomings" (5.2)
        • Kay Sohini, "The Graphic Memoir as a Transitional Object: ​ Narrativizing the Self in Alison Bechdel’s Are You My Mother?" (5.2)
        • Kelly Weber, ""We are the Poem": Structural Fissures and Levels in ​Lidia Yuknavitch’s The Chronology of Water" (5.2)
      • 5.2 Conversations >
        • Sam Cha, "​Unbearable Splendor: Against "Hybrid" Genre; Against Genre" (5.2)
        • Rachel Cochran, "Infection in “The Hour of Freedom”: Containment and Contamination in Philip Kennicott’s “Smuggler”" (5.2)
        • Katharine Coles, "​If a Body" (5.2)
        • A.M. Larks, "Still Playing the Girl" (5.2)
      • 5.2 Spotlight >
        • Charles Green, "In Praise of Navel Gazing: An Ars Umbilica" (5.2)
        • Sarah Kruse, "​The Essay: Landscape, Failure, and Ordinary’s Other" (5.2)
        • Desirae Matherly, "Something More Than This" (5.2)
        • Susan Olding, "Unruly Pupil" (5.2)
        • Jane Silcott, "Essaying Vanity" (5.2)
      • 5.2 Tribute to Louise DeSalvo >
        • Julija Sukys, "One Mother to Another: Remembering Louise DeSalvo (1942—2018)" (5.2)
        • Nancy Caronia and Edvige Giunta, "The Essential Louise DeSalvo Reading List" (5.2)
        • Nancy Caronia and Edvige Giunta, "From the Personal Edge: Beginning to Remember Louise DeSalvo" (5.2)
        • Richard Hoffman, "DeSalvo Tribute, IAM Books, Boston" (5.2)
        • Peter Covino, "Getting It Right – Homage for Louise DeSalvo" (5.2)
        • Mary Jo Bona, "Pedagogy of the Liberated and Louise DeSalvo’s Gifts" (5.2)
        • Joshua Fausty, "The Shared Richness of Life Itself" (5.2)
      • 5.2 Pedagogy >
        • Ashley Anderson, "Teaching Experimental Structures through Objects and ​John McPhee’s 'The Search for Marvin Gardens'" (5.2)
        • Trisha Brady, "Negotiating Linguistic Borderlands, Valuing Linguistic Diversity, and Incorporating Border Pedagogy in a College Composition Classroom" (5.2)
        • Kim Hensley Owens, "Writing Health and Disability: Two Problem-Based Composition Assignments" (5.2)
        • Reshmi Mukherjee, "Threads: From the Refugee Crisis: Creative Nonfiction and Critical Pedagogy" (5.2)
        • Susan M. Stabile, "Architectures of Revision" (5.2)
    • 6.1 (Fall 2019) >
      • 6.1 Articles >
        • Lynn Z. Bloom, "The Slippery Slope: ​Ideals and Ethical Issues in High Altitude Climbing Narratives" (6.1)
        • Tanya Bomsta, "The Performance of Epistemic Agency of the ​Autobiographical Subject in Terry Tempest Williams’s When Women Were Birds: Fifty-four Variations on Voice" (6.1)
        • Lorna Hummel, "Querying and Queering Caregiving: Reading Bodies Othered by Illness via Porochista Khakpour’s Sick: A Memoir" (6.1)
        • Laura Valeri, "Tell Tale Interviews: Lessons in True-Life Trauma Narratives Gleaned from ​Jennifer Fox’s The Tale" (6.1)
        • Arianne Zwartjes​, "Under the Skin: An Exploration of Autotheory" (6.1)
      • 6.1 Conversations >
        • Tracy Floreani, "​"Sewing and Telling": On Textile as Story" (6.1)
        • Tessa Fontaine, "The Limits of Perception: Trust Techniques in Nonfiction" (6.1)
        • Patrick Madden, "​Once More to 'His Last Game'" (6.1) >
          • Brian Doyle, "Twice More to the Lake" (6.1)
        • Randon Billings Noble, "The Sitting" (6.1)
        • Donna Steiner, "Serving Size: On Hunger and Delight" (6.1)
        • Natalie Villacorta, "Autofiction: Rightly Shaped for Woman’s Use" (6.1)
      • 6.1 Tribute to Ned Stuckey-French >
        • Marcia Aldrich, "The Book Reviewer" (6.1)
        • Bob Cowser, "Meeting Bobby Kennedy" (6.1)
        • Sonya Huber, "Working and Trying" (6.1)
        • Carl H. Klaus, "On Ned Stuckey-French and Essayists on the Essay" (6.1)
        • Robert Root, "On The American Essay in the American Century" (6.1)
      • 6.1 Pedagogy >
        • John Currie, "​The Naïve Narrator in Student-Authored Environmental Writing" (6.1)
        • Steven Harvey, "The Humble Essayist's Paragraph of the Week: A Discipline of the Heart and Mind" (6.1)
        • Reagan Nail Henderson, "Make Me Care!: Creating Digital Narratives in the Composition Classroom" (6.1)
        • Abriana Jetté, "Making Meaning: Authority, Authorship, and the Introduction to Creative Writing Syllabus" (6.1)
        • Jessie Male, "Teaching Lucy Grealy’s “Mirrorings” and the Importance of Disability Studies Pedagogy in Composition Classrooms" (6.1)
        • Wendy Ryden, "Liminally True: Creative Nonfiction as Transformative Thirdspace" (6.1)
    • 6.2 (Spring 2020) >
      • Guest Editor's Note to the Special Issue
      • 6.2 Articles >
        • Maral Aktokmakyan, "Revisioning Gendered Reality in ​Armenian Women’s Life Writing of the Post-Genocidal Era: Zaruhi Kalemkearian’s From the Path of My Life"
        • Manisha Basu, "Regimes of Reality: ​Of Contemporary Indian Nonfiction and its Free Men"
        • Stefanie El Madawi, "Telling Tales: Bearing Witness in Jennifer Fox’s The Tale"
        • Inna Sukhenko and Anastasia Ulanowicz, "Narrative, Nonfiction, and the Nuclear Other: Western Representations of Chernobyl in the Works of Adam Higginbotham, Serhii Plokhy, and Kate Brown"
      • 6.2 Conversations >
        • Leonora Anyango-Kivuva, "Daughter(s) of Rubanga: An Author, a Student, and Other Stories in Between"
        • Victoria Brown, "How We Write When We Write About Life: Caribbean Nonfiction Resisting the Voyeur"
        • David Griffith, "Wrecking the Disimagination Machine"
        • Stacey Waite, "Coming Out With the Truth"
      • Tribute to Michael Steinberg >
        • Jessica Handler, "Notes on Mike Steinberg"
        • Joe Mackall, "Remembering Mike Steinberg: On the Diamond and at the Desk"
        • Laura Julier, "Making Space"
      • 6.2 Pedagogy >
        • Jens Lloyd, "Truthful Inadequacies: Teaching the Rhetorical Spark of Bashō’s Travel Sketches"
        • George H. Jensen, "Situating Scenes: Cheryl Strayed’s “The Love of My Life”
        • Gregory Stephens, "Footnotes from the ‘Margins’: Outcomes-based Literary Nonfiction Pedagogy in Puerto Rico"
    • 7.1 (Fall 2020) >
      • 7.1 Articles >
        • Jo-Anne Berelowitz, "Mourning and Melancholia in Memoir" (Assay 7.1)
        • Carlos Cunha, "On the Chronicle" (Assay 7.1)
        • August Owens Grimm, "Haunted Memoir" (Assay 7.1)
        • Colleen Hennessy, "Irish Motherhood in Irish Nonfiction: Abortion and Agency" (Assay 7.1)
        • James Perrin Warren, "Underland: Reading with Robert Macfarlane" (Assay 7.1)
      • 7.1 Conversations >
        • Alex Brostoff, ""What are we going to do with our proximity, baby!?" ​ A Reply in Multiples of The Hundreds" (Assay 7.1)
        • Steven Harvey, "Lyric Memory: A Guide to the Mnemonics of Nonfiction" (Assay 7.1)
        • Lisa Low, "Proleptic Strategies in Race-Based Essays: Jordan K. Thomas, Rita Banerjee, and Durga Chew-Bose" (Assay 7.1)
        • Nicole Walker, "The Concrete Poetry of Ander Monson’s Essays" (Assay 7.1)
      • 7.1 Pedagogy >
        • Audrey T. Heffers, "Positionality and Experience in the Creative Nonfiction Classroom" (Assay 7.1)
        • James McAdams, "Ars Poetica, Ars Media, Ars COVID-19: Creative Writing in the Medical Classroom" (Assay 7.1)
        • Freesia McKee, "Feedback as Fan Letter" (Assay 7.1)
        • Tonee Mae Moll, "Teaching and Writing True Stories Through ​Feminist, Womanist and Black Feminist Epistemologies" (Assay 7.1)
        • Jill Stukenberg, "“Inspiration in the Drop of Ink”: Scholarship of Teaching and Learning Observations in Introduction to Creative Writing" (Assay 7.1)
    • 7.2 (Spring 2021) >
      • 7.2 Articles >
        • Whitney Brown, "Melting Ice and Disappointing Whale Hunts: A Climate-Focused Review of Contemporary Travel Writing" (Assay 7.2)
        • George Estreich, "Ross Gay’s Logics of Delight" (Assay 7.2)
        • Wes Jamison, "'You Are Absent': The Pronoun of Address in Nonfiction" (Assay 7.2)
        • Zachary Ostraff, "The Lyric Essay as a Form of Counterpoetics" (Assay 7.2)
        • Kara Zivin, "Interrogating Patterns: Meandering, Spiraling, and Exploding through ​The Two Kinds of Decay" (Assay 7.2)
      • 7.2 Conversations >
        • Sarah Minor
        • David Shields
      • 7.2 Pedagogy >
        • Megan Baxter, "On Teaching Brian Doyle’s “Leap” to Students Born After 9/11" (Assay 7.2)
        • Jennifer Case, "'Toward a New, Broader Perspective': Place-Based Pedagogy and the Narrative Interview"
        • Kelly K. Ferguson, "Cribbing Palpatine’s Syllabus: Or, What Professoring for the Evil Empire Taught Me ​About Instructional Design" (Assay 7.2)
        • Jennifer Pullen, "Seeking Joy in the Classroom: Nature Writing in 2020" (Assay 7.2)
    • 8.1 (Fall 2021) >
      • 8.1 Articles >
        • Allison Ellis, "Nonfiction Ghost Hunting" (Assay 8.1)
        • Lisa Levy, "We Are All Modern: Exploring the Vagaries of Consciousness in 20th & 21st Century Biography and Life Writing" (Assay 8.1)
        • Ashley Espinoza, "A las Mujeres: Hybrid Identities in Latina Memoir" (Assay 8.1)
        • Cherie Nelson, "The Slippery Self: Intertextuality in Lauren Slater’s Lying" (Assay 8.1)
        • Amie Souza Reilly, "Reading the Gaps: On Women’s Nonfiction and Page Space" (Assay 8.1)
      • 8.1 Conversations >
        • Amy Bowers, "The Elegiac Chalkboard in Jo Ann Beard’s “The Fourth State of Matter”" (Assay 8.1)
        • Theresa Goenner, "​The Mania of Language: Robert Vivian's Dervish Essay" (Assay 8.1)
        • Kathryn Nuernberger, "Writing Women’s Histories" (Assay 8.1)
        • Louisa McCullough, "The Case for In-Person Conversation" (Assay 8.1)
        • Kat Moore, "Rupture in Time (and Language): Hybridity in Kathy Acker’s Essays" (Assay 8.1)
      • 8.1 Pedagogy >
        • Mike Catron, "There’s No Such Thing as Too Much of Jason Sheehan’s “There’s No Such Thing As Too Much Barbecue”: ​A Pedagogical Discussion" (Assay 8.1)
        • Brooke Covington, "Ars Media: A Toolkit for Narrative Medicine in Writing Classrooms" (Assay 8.1)
        • W. Scott Olsen, "​A Desire for Stories" (Assay 8.1)
        • C.S. Weisenthal, "​Seed Stories: Pitched into the Digital Archive" (Assay 8.1)
    • 8.2 (Spring 2022) >
      • 8.2 Articles >
        • Barrie Jean Borich, "Radical Surprise: The Subversive Art of the Uncertain," (8.2)
        • George Estreich, "Feeling Seen: Blind Man’s Bluff, Memoir, and the Sighted Reader" (8.2)
        • Kristina Gaddy, "When Action is Too Much and Not Enough: A Study of Mode in Narrative Journalism" (8.2)
        • Marya Hornbacher, "Solitude Narratives: Towards a Future of the Form" (8.2)
        • Margot Kotler, "Susan Sontag, Lorraine Hansberry, and the ​Politics of Queer Biography " (8.2)
      • 8.2 Conversations >
        • Michael W. Cox , "On Two Published Versions of Joan Didion’s “Marrying Absurd” (8.2)
        • Hugh Martin, "No Cheap Realizations: On Kathryn Rhett’s “Confinements” (8.2)
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ASSAY: A JOURNAL OF NONFICTION STUDIES
4.2

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Michael W. Cox

Privileging the Sentence:
David Foster Wallace’s Writing Process for 

“The View from Mrs. Thompson’s” 



“I don’t discover the structure except by writing sentences because I can’t think structurally well enough.”
—David Foster Wallace, Quack This Way
​


On reserve at the Harry Ransom Center (HRC) at the University of Texas is the archive of David Foster Wallace, which holds various drafts and proofs of the writer’s oeuvre, including both fiction and nonfiction [1]. Much scholarship has been devoted to Wallace’s fiction; less to his nonfiction. This essay is interested in the latter, in particular Wallace’s piece on 9/11 for Rolling Stone, “The View from Mrs. Thompson’s” (Oct 25, 2001). Multiple versions of it are on file at HRC, including, in one folder alone, Wallace’s handwritten draft, a largely pristine typescript draft, an edited version of the typescript, and a copy of the article that appeared in Rolling Stone [2]. Wallace did fairly light editing in the second typescript: just a few word changes and the striking of a paragraph that he restored for Consider the Lobster. Rolling Stone, for its part, changed very little from this second typescript. Nearly all change takes place between Wallace’s first two drafts. And so this paper will devote most of its attention to the difference between the handwritten draft and first typescript, in particular to changes Wallace makes to his sentences. By honing them carefully, Wallace finds his way inside the story, understands its structure more deeply, and enables himself to turn an incomplete rough draft into a thoughtful, polished essay. While such a process is not without precedent, the degree to which Wallace trusts his sentences to lead him from darkness to light is rare, warranting a close look by nonfiction writers and scholars alike.


​Background

For much of his writing career, Wallace seemed to give short shrift to his nonfiction, perhaps especially the journalism. He said on more than one occasion that he was “not a journalist” (e.g., Jacob 153, Scocca 22), implying that nonfiction took second place in his career. Even so, Daniel B. Roberts argues that it would be unwise to take Wallace at his word when making such claims. Roberts states, “It would be weak to take Wallace’s tongue-in-cheek humility as definitive evidence of what he was or wasn’t as a [nonfiction] writer.” He goes on to say that “Wallace was likely aware, even in his more self-doubting moments, that he was a skilled reporter.” Josh Roiland, another advocate for Wallace’s nonfiction, offers a detailed look at Wallace’s journalistic output, which Roiland categorizes as “literary journalism”: “a form of nonfiction writing that adheres to all of the reportorial and truth-telling covenants of traditional journalism, while employing rhetorical and storytelling techniques more commonly associated with fiction. In short, it is journalism as literature” (“Getting Away From It All” 26). “The View from Mrs. Thompson’s” is among the eleven pieces of Wallace’s nonfiction that qualify, all of which would be distinct from Wallace’s memoir, reviews, etc.

In the same year that Roberts and Roiland are making their case for Wallace's journalistic excellence, Wallace biographer D.T. Max is arguing that Wallace felt that his nonfiction was too easy to write and that it was a distraction from what mattered more. In a Page-Turner essay for the New Yorker, Max quotes from one of Wallace’s letters to Don DeLillo to undergird his assertion that “Wallace never loved his nonfiction as he did his fiction. It was too easy, too unencoded; it took him too far from the Great White Novel that he was always trying to write” (“DFW’s Nonfiction: Better with Age”). Max would have known that Wallace had acknowledged in his interview with Scocca that he thought of himself first and foremost “as a fiction writer,” saying,  “fiction’s more important to me” (22). Bear in mind, however, that in this oft-cited interview from 1998, Wallace appears to be burned out, for the moment, with his nonfiction. This is more noticeable in the long version of the interview (Melville House) than in the edited version reprinted by University Press of Mississippi. Know, too, that despite Wallace’s comments to Scocca about nonfiction fatigue, he wrote a major piece on the porn industry later that year.

​However ambivalent Wallace may have been about his nonfiction, given his inability to finish his third novel (published posthumously as The Pale King), Wallace did for a time consider focusing exclusively on nonfiction (Every Love Story 296). After all, beginning with his work at Harper’s in the 1990s, in particular the state-fair and cruise-ship pieces, his nonfiction brought him good money and a certain degree of fame; more recently, his 2006 essay “Roger Federer as Religious Experience” had brought him a great deal of joy in the writing itself. Even when he was blocked on his fiction, he could work toward a fast-approaching deadline to produce clear and intricate nonfiction prose. In an interview with the Atlantic, when asked about Wallace sometimes “fabricat[ing] details” in such essays as the state-fair piece, Max answered,
The odd thing is that I don’t think he needed to do this. His prose and perceptions are so rich that he didn’t really have to make these embellishments. In my mind his embellishments were always a little shticky. I don’t think those pieces would have been much less admired if he’d been a little more literal-minded in what he saw. (“David Foster Wallace: Genius, Fabulist, Would-Be Murderer”). ​
Not surprisingly, Josh Roiland rejects such assertions in “The Fine Print,” where Roiland writes, among other things, that Max “makes broad generalization regarding Wallace’s fidelity to the facts” and that, in the process, Max “gets some of his facts wrong” (154). In fairness to Max, he appears to approve of Wallace’s 9/11 piece, which Max calls “a short, delicate essay” (Every Love Story 262). It’s Wallace’s early nonfiction, primarily, that gives Max pause.

Wallace speaks to the process of drafting and revising in several of his interviews—see in particular his interview with a Amherst Magazine, where he calls himself a “Five Draft man,” which he says he developed while writing a paper every two weeks in an undergrad philosophy course at Amherst: “I got down a little system of writing and two rewrites and two typed drafts. I’ve used it ever since. I like it” (55). He goes on to say that “the first two of these drafts are pen-and-paper, which is a bit old-fashioned” (60). For “The View from Mrs. Thompson’s,” the Ransom Center holds only one “pen-and-paper,” a mostly clean typescript—which varies dramatically from the handwritten draft—and a slightly repaginated typescript with Wallace’s own light copyediting. Obviously Wallace produced fewer drafts than the five of his professed system in the small window of time he had for the assignment.

This paper will in part explore the structure of the finished essay, especially the first third of it. While Wallace’s first-draft sentences allow him to arrive at a more than serviceable structure, the power of “The View from Mrs. Thompson’s” derives less from its structuring than from Wallace’s having transformed the sentences between drafts, turning an unfinished narrative devoted largely to observable facts into a moving meditation on how 9/11 played out in Bloomington, Illinois. One comment by Wallace about drafting also touches on essay structure, and so it’s worth recounting here: He has compared the writing of his first draft to epilepsy (Wallace and Garner 65). With regard to his nonfiction specifically, he was asked how he goes about researching and “organizing [his] thoughts when [he’s] writing a long essay.” Wallace’s candid answer: “I find it very difficult. The truth is that most of the nonfiction pieces I do are at least partly experiential. They involve going to a place, talking to people, taking notes.... I end up taking a hundred times more notes than I need. My first draft usually approximates somebody in the midst of an epileptic seizure. It’s usually about the second or the third draft where I begin having any idea of actually what this thing is about.” Wallace appears to have in mind the pieces he wrote on the Illinois State Fair, the cruise ship, some pieces on tennis and on the porn industry, etc. “The View from Mrs. Thompson’s” is a much shorter essay, of course, but its subject matter is darker, graver. While the magnitude of that historic event far exceeds the importance of the leisure pieces Wallace usually wrote, his note taking would essentially have amounted to only two days’ worth of material, not the fortnight of a state fair or week-long vacation typical of a cruise ship. He then groped his way through a loosely structured handwritten draft, leaving it unfinished after some seven pages of single-spaced scrawl to begin typing, at which point he had a good enough idea what his typed pages should look like; how the voice should sound; how the tone should ring.

The changes Wallace makes in the typescript, at least for the first third of the essay, are largely of two types: (1) revisions of original wording to sharpen precision and (2) additions to the original material, to round out and deepen the sentences and, very often, the storytelling itself. Occasionally—and only occasionally—change takes place between the handwritten draft and typescript that calls into question the veracity of the details (e.g., in the handwritten draft, a woman at a gas station makes a comment to another woman about her son; in the typescript, she speaks about two sons to a man). As well, a comparison of Wallace’s corrected typescript to the version Rolling Stone printed suggests that their fact-checking department found at least four inaccuracies, all small (i.e., the incorrect spelling of a convenience store, as well as the interstate along which it is located; the wrong call letters of a radio station; and, it seems, the wrong size of a TV set). Further, at the first use in the text of Mrs. Thompson’s name, Rolling Stone supplied the following footnote: “EDITORS NOTE: SOME NAMES HAVE BEEN CHANGED, AND SOME DETAILS HAVE BEEN ALTERED.” The periodical used all capital letters, making it hard for even the most casual reader to miss, and while a name-change or two might give few pause (protecting sources, e.g., has long been a journalistic staple), the alteration of a detail is somewhat more concerning. Which details, and why? The fact-checking? Aside from that, the agent of name-and-detail changing would have to be Wallace himself, since his corrected typescript is nearly verbatim what Rolling Stone ran. Indeed, the handwritten draft shows that Wallace originally had used another first name for “Duane,” and that his mother is not Mrs. Bracero but someone else at the gathering. “F----” in the typescript appears in the handwritten version with a full-name that does in fact begin with the letter “F.”

​But given the nature of the essay—the way 9/11 plays out in small-town Bloomington in gas stations, Wallace’s neighborhood, and people’s living rooms on, respectively, the 12th and 11th of September—fact-checking the number and names of the people Wallace writes about—or, for that matter, the number of tiny flags peppering a lawn or the size of someone’s flag or flagpole—becomes not only moot but virtually impossible from the distance of Rolling Stone’s editorial office. As for the details Wallace reports in the essay about the televised coverage of 9/11, certainly Rolling Stone editors could verify any times or events Wallace specifies (e.g., the exact time at which a particular tower is hit by a plane or how it looks when it collapses to the ground). Of course, Wallace had written the long piece for them on John McCain’s presidential bid the year before; it went on to win the National Magazine Award for Feature Writing. The magazine’s editors knew well the extent to which they could trust his work, and by this point in his career, Wallace understood the degree to which his essay had to stand up to editorial scrutiny. He had a vested stake in handing them clean, verifiable copy. The editors had no complaints about his sentences; these they let stand.


​Method

I traveled to Texas in early May 2017 to page through nonfiction portions of Wallace’s archive, hoping to find something new about Wallace’s Midwest—or at least about the way he writes it. I had lived in the city of Chicago during many of Wallace’s formative years in Champaign-Urbana; years later, having left Illinois for graduate study in Florida, I found much to value when reading Wallace’s essays on the Midwest in Harper’s Magazine, especially his depictions of and thoughts on the landscape, weather, and people. His tennis memoir and state-fair piece have become fairly well-trod scholarly ground in the time since their first appearance, in part because of the usual questions about an author’s childhood and its influence on his work, but also because of questions raised about their veracity. “The View from Mrs. Thompson’s,” the last of Wallace’s three essays on the Midwest and also the most moving, has somehow attracted less attention pro or con.

I know of two scholars who have worked directly with Wallace’s nonfiction about the Midwest as, specifically, Midwestern writing. In a review of D.T. Max’s biography that appeared in the Chicago Reader, Craig Fehrman argues that Max missed altogether how the Midwest “influenced [Wallace] ... in his philosophical and artistic orientation toward the larger world.” As well, in a companion piece to his review, Fehrman describes the angry reaction of the local press years earlier to Wallace’s state-fair piece, with its lacerating descriptions of, among other things, waist-lines, dietary habits, and make-up and clothing styles. Fehrman notes that Wallace, who was surprised by the backlash, is reported to have said, “If the piece came off ... as some one [sic] sneering at the Midwest, then that’s really a deficiency in the piece.  It really wasn’t meant to do that” (“‘A Typical Case of a Small-Town Boy Who Betrayed His Roots’: David Foster Wallace as a Midwestern Writer”). Josh Roiland argues that the 9/11 piece represents a kind of synthesis for Wallace, who had idealized the Midwest a decade earlier in the tennis memoir and then attacked it, more or less, three years later in the state-fair essay. For Roiland, the third and final essay “reconciles these divergent impressions; it’s the Midwest of understanding and acceptance” (“Spiritually Midwestern”).

While wending through the many folders on Wallace, and on his three Midwestern essays in particular, I came upon the handwritten draft for the 9/11 piece. In the same folder (30.11) were two typescript drafts, one nearly pristine, the other slightly differently paginated but showing copyediting marks (Wallace’s own—I verified this by comparing the handwriting on the copyediting to a handful of words—“one,” “the,” “interior”—also used in the handwritten draft). In a 4th sleeve, a photocopy of the Rolling Stone article. The second typescript bore up to a line by line comparison to the first—the same words but with two lines extending to a 12th page. The second typescript also bore up, largely, to the version in Rolling Stone—they incorporated nearly all of Wallace’s copyediting (including his cut of the full paragraph devoted to the local newspaper), changed a couple of facts (see fact-checking above), and added a paragraph break at a key point where Wallace himself had done a fair amount of line-editing. Aside from this, their changes amounted to following their house style (e.g., use of hyphens or capitalization).

For the Lobster book, by the way, Wallace appears to have gone back to his second typescript, rather than using the Rolling Stone version. Even so, aside from restoring the paragraph on the Pantagraph, there’s little difference between the magazine and book versions but for a little phrase-refining (e.g., “Bloomingtonians” in Rolling Stone becomes the more graceful though less concise “people in Bloomington”). As well, the fact-checking changes made for Rolling Stone get mixed treatment in Lobster: Wallace used the correct call letters for the radio station in Lobster but restored his own quirky spelling of the convenience store where he sips tea in a back room as well as using the interstate he originally specified; he also restores the size of the TV set.

For this paper, I have made five tables that highlight, quite literally, the differences between Wallace’s handwritten draft and his first typescript. I did this for only the first third of the essay, which amounts to the entirety of the heading information, “SYNECDOCHE,” and “WEDNESDAY.” Regarding the portion of the essay that comes next, “ARIEL & GROUND VIEWS,” the typescript largely hews to the order of the handwritten draft (a rundown of Bloomington’s population, prosperity, weather, churches, and television-watching habits), if not as much to the sentences themselves. By the time the handwritten draft gets to the material that would become “TUESDAY,” its order bears little resemblance to that of the typescript, rendering side by side comparison relatively useless. As well, quite a bit of material, especially on the last couple of pages of the handwritten draft, simply drops away. Mostly these are notes about Tuesday afternoon, when more visitors show up at Mrs. Thompson’s and conversation turns to asking one another where they were when they first heard the news; in the typescript, Wallace focuses only on events that occurred that morning. (As Wallace said to Garner, “My [writing] process appears to be getting precipitate out of an enormous amount of solution” [66].) But it appears that sticking closely to the handwritten draft’s sentences in the early-going was enough to get Wallace started and help him enter deeply into the material, allowing him to cut, rearrange, and improvise more automatically as his typing progressed.

​A final thought on the difference between drafts and what gets left out: Wallace is perfectly capable of self-censorship. For instance, he changes names, as noted above. In the handwritten draft he also refers initially to his neighbor—the one with the big flag and nice, shiny flagpole—as being a “putz” but wisely lines it through; it does not make its way into the typescript, where Wallace lets the details about his neighbor’s likability speak for themselves. Truly, if Wallace by chance did dislike the man, a reader would not guess it from the typescript, which makes great effort to be fair to everyone, arguably avoiding altogether the “Asshole problem” famously described elsewhere by Wallace (“It All Gets Quite Tricky" 32). Once he moves from the handwritten draft to the typescript, Wallace lets all of his displeasure and general sense of abjection or misanthropy settle in on “Duane,” with whom, of course, he ultimately aligns himself. The handwritten draft appears to be the place where Wallace jots down just about any sentence that could be used—some of them, like the “putz” line, feel forced—but issues regarding ethos come to the fore once he starts typing. It’s not just that Wallace has a better idea where he’s heading by then; he also knows better who he needs to be.


​Findings

This may be as good a place as any to state that aside from who wrote it and the circumstances under which it was written, little about the handwritten draft is exceptional. The content itself is largely straightforward description. Few of the sentences feature anything beyond ordinary writing. Little emotion is conjured, the tone dispassionate. In contrast, the typewritten draft sounds like classic Wallace. It moves gracefully as narrative momentum builds; description is vivid and frequently riveting; emotion is based on how the events affect people in Bloomington, including the writer, himself a somewhat wary but largely needy part(icipant) of/(in) the community. The reader of this paper can see what I mean by reading, in sequence, all of the left columns on the five tables below and then the right columns. On the right, blue is used to show changes made to the handwritten draft’s wording (including the occasional change of fact); yellow shows new information, i.e., what a composition teacher would term “development” of the base material. I should note that while it was a little hard occasionally to decide how to color-code differences between hand and type, usually it was easy to make the call. For instance, the first independent clause of dialogue in the original, “My boy thought it was some movie like Independence Day,” becomes, “With my boys they thought it was all some movie like Independence Day.” The preposition, plural pronoun, and adjective “all” have been added, so they code yellow, while “boy” has been made plural, which earns blue.


​Table 1

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“Bloomingtonians,” while perhaps an unwieldy construction, is obviously more specific and no less unwieldy than “Illinoisans,” and thus a more effective choice. Having the cashier’s smock bear the workplace moniker “Osco” serves to enhance imagery, and certainly the man with the homemade vest cuts a more striking image that just another large woman in a nameless cashier’s smock (though, of course, both instances can’t be true, unless the man was also present in the store, and who the woman was originally speaking to—assuming such an utterance occurred, etc.—was ambiguous). The minor changes to the sentence of dialogue are in keeping with Wallace’s own comments about how he approaches dialogue: “You sort of have to rewrite it so it sounds more out-loud” (Scocca 31). Certainly the woman’s revised speech pattern sounds more “down home” than the handwritten version’s suburban trim; it’s also in keeping with a footnote of Wallace’s from a later portion of the published essay that describes the local accent as “rural.”

As for the new material in this passage, the heading information about location, date, and subject certainly helps ground the material, especially in the absence of a title on the typescript. It is unknown whether Wallace had decided at this point to have no title or whether he was simply leaving it up to Rolling Stone. The addition of parentheses and a qualification (i.e., “what probably qualifies as”) to the earlier version of the caveat serve to shape a classic Wallace aside—a reference to himself as writer of the piece that calls attention to both his vulnerability and desire to be honest while acknowledging at the same time that his perception is surely subjective and perhaps even occasionally in error, though of small importance (by use of parentheses) compared to the events herein. He may have learned the utility of being honest about his state of mind through his study of the nonfiction of Joan Didion, a writer who makes her biases and limitations part of nearly every story she writes. (See, for instance, her highly critical yet deeply empathetic examination of the Las Vegas wedding industry in “Marrying Absurd.” Wallace had been an "enormous fan" of Didion's essays since college [Scocca 36].) Wallace’s added use of “SYNECDOCHE” as a subtitle for this opening helps to designate it as being representative of the rest of the essay (see his comments to Garner about how an opening should “lay out the terms of an argument” and “imply the stakes” [80]) as well as, more obviously, to suggest that what’s going on in Bloomington on the 12th of September is representative of what has gone on throughout the Midwest.

​Note the added human connection and direct address, too, in Wallace’s new material made by the “stranger [who] will smile warmly at you” but usually eschew “chitchat” and the reason for breaking that routine, which Wallace also chooses to bring down to a human scale by his use of the simile “traffic accident.” In short, this opening has been transformed in the act of revision in ways that make both writer and town vastly more human and worth caring about. And yet, the sentences that serve as the basis of the opening were almost surely not the place where Wallace began his thoughts, given their marginal position on the first page of his handwritten draft. They were probably something arrived at once Wallace figured out what he was trying to do. Even so, he managed to keep the size of his opening to a single concise paragraph, apparently the ideal size, as he remarks to Garner, of a “good opener [that], first and foremost, fails to repel” (80).


​Table 2

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The changes to this first section of “WEDNESDAY” obviously help to refine imagery. Half of the base is devoted to a series of still shots showing the variety of ways that people in and around Bloomington display their flags; the other half focuses on a neighbor’s very large and much fussed over flag. Readers will note that the neighbor undergoes a change of vocation, from “postal supervisor” to “retired CPA.” Both could be true, of course, but it’s possible that jobs, like names, have been changed to protect identities (or, less charitably, to avoid lawsuits). Perhaps Wallace was simply mistaken initially, while drafting, and corrected himself in type. On the handwritten draft, as noted above, Wallace has lined through a rude assessment of the neighbor (“he’s a putz”). By 2001, even while writing in a “state of shock,” Wallace wills himself to become a kinder writer than the one who five years earlier described a middle-aged woman sitting at a table with him on a cruise ship as looking like “Jackie Gleason in drag”; granted, circumstances for the two occasions are radically dissimilar.

Syntactically, the most striking change appears in the next-to-last sentence of what has become the first of two paragraphs. Wallace goes from “Several houses have big quilt-size flags hanging from their second story” to “More than a few large homes around Franklin Park or out on the east side have enormous multi-story flags hanging gonfalon-style down over their facades.” This is a perfect example of my earlier comment that much of the writing of the handwritten draft is unremarkable. But in the typescript, Wallace transforms a basic observation into something that sounds like David Foster Wallace. We can chart the differences between the sentences phrase by phrase and see the superiority of the enhancement; at the same time, we can see how firmly grounded in the first sentence the second sentence is. In the second, however, we get a strong sense of the diverse geographic make-up of Bloomington—two parts of the town are named, one somewhat generically though still somewhat specifically (“the east side”) and the other a very specific neighborhood (“Franklin Park”). Somehow this variety of place names pleases; certainly the pairing is superior to its nondescript base, “[s]everal houses.” In the second sentence we also gain a much richer image of not just the size of the flags, but of how they “hang” (“gonfalon-style down over their facades,” with “gonfalon” subtly evoking the martial implications of flag display, something Wallace would surely know, given his love for and actual collection of unusual words). Certainly the revised version has a music all its own when said out loud (hear/feel not just the cadence, but also alliteration and assonance).


​As for additional material, the sound the wind makes in the cornfields has been deftly developed: it’s a “light” surf that Wallace apparently had imagined—or it has become such through revision—and now we know just how far back from certain natural obstructions of specific number it’s meant to be heard (“two dunes back”). Also worth remarking is how nicely the low clause “I shit you not” pairs up with the biblical wording that ends this sentence and passage. While “God’s own wrath” somehow turns out to be a perfect phrase to retain from the base draft, the addition of “does” as a helping verb helps seal the biblical tone of the final clause (at some faint level you hear the trace of its King James undergirding, “doth”). Don’t miss as well just how much research Wallace has managed to put into describing all aspects of his neighbor’s flag set-up: the cement has become “reinforced”; “halyard” details have been added, including the fact that now it’s the halyard, not the rope, making sound, and it’s no longer “mournful” (a highly personal choice of adjectives that could be easily challenged), just “loud” (an apt adjective many times over and an easy sell for the reader. This substitution also allows the sound of the corn to stand alone in this passage as the one aural evocation of melancholy).


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We’re in the realm of dialogue with this table, and thus for Wallace in the realm of fair play. As noted on the left side of the table, Wallace poses a question to his neighbor about “the purpose” of “all the flags out this morning,” and in the margin beside the question, Wallace has written, “Ask three different people,” indicating that he plans to pose the same question to others. Yet, the answers themselves appear on the same page of lined college paper, just after his neighbor’s reply, rather than on a separate sheet of paper or in the margin, either of which would have indicated that Wallace had conducted the survey some hours or days later. A skeptic might take this sequence as suggestive that Wallace simply made up the answers.

However, other, more Wallace-friendly explanations are possible. Wallace may well have stopped writing to conduct his brief survey by phone or on a run through town. Another possibility is that he simply saved space at the bottom of the page of his draft (three blank lines would have been available), planning to gather these responses later, and moved on while in the act of writing to the top of a second page of ruled paper. If it is this second possibility, he appears to be using the same black pen in the same hurried hand; to find all the room he needs to write the replies, he has to use the bottom margin and far-right side of the page, which suggest that he did in fact move on to the top of his second page as he wrote, saving the bottom of page 1 for his research. Whatever Wallace’s process, his typescript shows four, not three, footnoted responses aside from his neighbor’s. As well, Wallace prefaces these lines with a note stating that he gathered the material during his “flag- and Magic-Marker-hunts” (methodological aside: Wallace’s preface could be coded blue, rather than yellow, if I were to assume that it’s actually a revision of the much more terse “Ask three different people:” noted in the left column and commented upon above).


Regardless of Wallace’s method, the original lines of dialogue grow sometimes and change at others. For instance, Wallace’s simple “Nice flag” greeting to his neighbor becomes “Hell of a nice flag and display apparatus.” Quite possibly, of course, Wallace only jotted down a kind of short hand on the hand-written draft and knew he’d get the whole phrase down in typescript. However, the change of his neighbor’s reply from the bland “Why thank you” to a far more compelling “Ought to be. Cost enough” isn’t as easy to explain away. Even so, it’s quite possible his neighbor did say this very thing during their conversation, and that he said it fairly close to his “thank you” reply. Wallace is surely writing the exchange from memory anyway, though possibly he has approached his neighbor on 9/12 with a pen and notepad in hand. In part I’d like to think so, and that his neighbor knew he was being interviewed. In fairness to Wallace, I do not know at what point he actually knew he was going to write a publishable piece of journalism on 9/11, though his handwritten draft suggests he knew the moment he pressed his pen against the top of page 1 of his college-lined paper. As for the changes and additions to the footnoted replies, the only one that calls into question enhancement beyond the call of duty is the student’s, which bears only the base-word “pseudo” in the rewrite. Questions of veracity aside, the refigured response is far more thoughtful and engaging than its knee-jerk, adolescent-sounding forerunner; thankfully the T-shirt has also disappeared. Assuming Wallace did the legwork to gather both responses, he settled on the right one, even if it means he may have cherry-picked his smartest grad student to offer it up. Wallace makes no overt claim that the responses he lands on are perfectly representative of a broad cross-section of “Bloomingtonians,” nor need he. After all, what he’s writing in this case is journalism, not social science, more man-in-the-street style than randomly selected.


​One other comment is worth making about the rewrite. It’s possible that Wallace considers his scenes as good a place as any to tie parts of the essay together and help unify story-telling, not simply as a place to make dialogue sing. For instance, his own line’s added “display apparatus” harkens back to the lanyard and other details added to his neighbor’s flag set-up. Conversely, deciding to eliminate the “T-shirt” here allows Wallace to save it for his description of “loathsome Duane” later on in the piece, which, at just a few thousand words, should probably spare the reader too many black-shirted Bloomingtonians of a certain age.


​Table 4

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The left side and right both show the first part of a long paragraph in handwritten and typed versions, halved here for the sake of fitting material comfortably on these tables. Here’s where Wallace’s essay gets truly interesting by relying on his self-awareness (or out and out paranoia) to make a keen observation. If everyone is displaying flags, what does it say about the one house on the street (or in the town) that isn’t? Wallace’s “you” is a barely disguised version of “I”; he would know readers know that, of course, but at the same time he gives the appearance of including them. For the most part the changes (in blue) make wording more specific. “Accretive” and “it gets easier and easier” replace Wallace’s filler words “sort of” and “you can kind of”; “accretive” also sounds better, aurally, between “weird” and “pressure” (the series of “e”s plus the extra beat), while helping, at the same time, to make “weird” weirder. “People” (last line) arguably evokes a stronger image than “them” in that it’s less vague; “people” also manages to increase the number of eyes on the house without the flag, in part because the plural pronoun of the handwritten draft is being used informally to denote a single person.

​The new material begins with a transition that sounds informal and hustles the reader inside the paragraph. “The point being that on Wednesday here” also helps justify the previous scene’s inclusion, lest anyone think the scene’s only reason for being was to be scenic. But it’s the four new sentences, which appear as a single unit, that develop the passage emotionally. The first sentence helps to make clear the writer’s concern about not being one of the crowd—what lack of information or brain-part has kept him from realizing that everyone needs a flag tucked away somewhere, just in case? After all, as the next sentence makes clear, even people who don’t care all that much about the appearance of their home have the God-given sense to have on hand a flag. The third new sentence, about the Yellow Pages, briefly injects humor alongside pathos—imagine a panicking Wallace (or someone like him) scrambling for the phone book, to look under Flag. (Granted, few readers would have found it even briefly, blackly humorous back when it appeared in Rolling Stone six weeks after the event.) And if the reader needs to be told what the impact of this situation is, emotionally speaking, the fourth sentence brings it home: “There starts to be actual tension.” This final sentence of insertion lays the groundwork for the brilliant final sentence, largely intact from the handwritten draft, about people actually confronting “you” for not having a flag—people who “walk by” or “stop their car” to do so—only of course they don’t do so, or haven’t done so, because the sentence begins with “nobody.” We could ponder how such a paranoid thought would ever be worth sharing in what amounts to a feature piece. And yet, it’s obviously effective as one more means of drawing a reader in and inviting him to imagine 9/11 as it was experienced hundreds of miles away from New York City. If something like this is part of what Wallace means by “embellishment”—as in “you hire a fiction writer to do nonfiction, there’s going to be the occasional bit of embellishment” (Scocca 31)—what reader could object?


​Table 5

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The right side shows how the top half of this passage has been transformed through an evenly distributed mix of revised phrasing (blue) and development (yellow) alongside original wording (white). This portion represents the wind-up to “WEDNESDAY”’s finale—i.e., the bottom all-yellow half. One wonders if Wallace revised first and then, on a separate pass, inserted new sentences and phrases. Anyway, bear in mind that the person in search of a flag (i.e., Wallace) is experiencing “tension” all the while he travels through downtown along the streets and then out by the interstate(s). Revision allows Wallace to add a new stop (“the novelty shop downtown”) and to add clarifying detail to the setting (the “bar” at the “VFW hall” as the reason why it can’t yet be open); such enhancement allows Wallace to show more vividly that he has left no stone unturned and leads naturally to what appears to be a little breakdown or emotional collapse, i.e., the brand-new material that forms the last part of this passage and the final moment of the “WEDNESDAY” section of the essay.

​Here, Wallace has the good sense to make clear how silly a thing it is, given the circumstances, to lose it in the middle of a convenience store: “All those people dead, and I’m sent to the edge by [my inability to find] a plastic flag.” Others in the store notice him in distress (“It doesn’t get really bad until people ask if I’m OK”), and finally he is comforted by the store’s “proprietor ... who offers solace and a shoulder and a strange kind of unspoken understanding.” Wallace’s acute self-awareness of just how different he is—not having a flag to begin with, not being able to find a flag to fit in, not being able to keep it together as a result—render him on the page as someone trying very hard to respect social mores under extreme circumstances. As a writer, he has managed to make the story of 9/11 as it plays out in a small town in the Midwest about himself, at least for these few sentences. While some might find this shockingly narcissistic, readers who appreciate souls in torment find the self-abasement both relatable and heart-rending. 9/11 was awful—shocking and trying—and nearly everyone who thinks and feels has his own story about that day and the day after, and probably every one of them would in some way involve Wallace’s twin objects of scrutiny, televised coverage of the event and the immediate aftermath of flag-waving. And so being able to handle (or write about) not being able to handle it makes a potent combination, as Wallace’s revision of his handwritten draft shows.  It’s the handwritten draft that was “written very fast and in shock”; it’s the typed draft that gives Wallace the chance to slow down and focus, and to realize by then that what others would make of his state of mind “probably qualifies as” shock, but not necessarily.


​Discussion

By attending to Wallace’s sentences in the early-going and seeing how they change, we are able to follow Wallace transforming himself from something like an observer to someone like a witness—i.e., someone who can impart a deeper truth because he is wholly involved in the proceedings. By getting inside his sentences, Wallace is able to get inside the experience and convey not just what happened, but how it felt. Paradoxically, he is able to set aside his self-consciousness by working in service to the story. While some writers prefer to know the big picture and even to outline their stories extensively prior to the actual writing, Wallace is not one of them. His approach is more inductive. Once he has a good enough sense of where he’s heading—once he sees enough workable sentences on the handwritten page—he begins to type. And once he begins typing, those viable sentences change, refine, extend and deepen, and so does the story. So much so that Wallace is able, from the more dross-laden portions of the handwritten draft, to pick out the handful of phrases worth developing.

The three most moving moments in “The View from Mrs. Thompson’s” are (1) that scene in the back of the convenience store; (2) the moment watching TV at Mrs. Thompson’s when everyone realizes that the dots falling off the buildings are people who are still alive, some of whose shoes are slipping off as they plummet to their deaths; and (3) the moment near the end of the essay when Wallace realizes that Mrs. Thompson and her friends are quietly praying, and he too prays. These moments pack enormous emotional power, in large part by taking us deeply inside Wallace’s perspective. Each of these three passages, however, is barely present in the handwritten draft.

The first moment is referenced only implicitly, by a single sentence that doesn’t mention a “proprietor” or back room: “A couple small convenience stores out by I-74 say they had some [flags] up front, by the bandanas and NASCAR caps, but they’re gone.” The dots from the second moment aren’t there at all in handwritten draft, though one sentence on p. 5 of the draft mentions “film of people jumping from the building,” and how the women at Mrs. Thompson’s house go to the kitchen when it is shown. In the draft the sentence seems like little more than a note attempting to record one more random fact of the day. As for the third moment’s praying, the sole reference to prayer in the handwritten draft is when Wallace mentions President Bush’s eyes: “Nobody notices how Bushe’s [sic] eyes seem to get closer together every time he [come?] and how there’s so little light or spark of mind inside then you find yourself praying you’re wrong about him that he’s smarter than you think.” The last of these sentences is far more disjointed than the other two, both of which are grammatical, for that matter. But it becomes carefully developed in the final two paragraphs of the typescript, just prior to the essay’s concluding handful of sentences. As John Jeremiah Sullivan has noted of David Foster Wallace’s nonfiction, it is Wallace’s “sheer ability to consider a situation, to revolve it in his mental fingers like a jewel whose integrity he doubts,” that helps to make his essays so intricate.  The minimal presence in the handwritten draft of what will become the essay’s most powerful moments suggests that Wallace relies heavily on improvisation of base detail once he gets round to typing. It’s unlikely he has entire scenes or moments in his mind when his fingers meet the keys, but he has at least the rudiments in place.


If we allow that the opening of the essay serves as a beginning in an Aristotelian sense (a fairly easy allowance), and that the conclusion of the essay begins very near the end of it, with the sentence “Innocent people can be hard to be around,” then all three of these moments of heightened emotion, perhaps not surprisingly, appear in the middle. The back room of the convenience store is described at the top of p. 4 (of 11 full pages) on the first typescript, the dots around the middle of p. 8, and the prayer on p 11. In his interview with Garner, Wallace says of the middle (or of a middle) that “[i]t lays out the argument in steps, not in a robotic way, but in a way that the reader can tell (a) what the distinct steps or premises of the argument are; and (b) this is the tricky one, how they’re connected to each other” (83). While Wallace is talking overtly about arguments, of course, what he says largely holds for any essay, including “Mrs. Thompson’s” (which we could argue is, ultimately, an argument); certainly what he says about how the pieces of an essay are “connected to each other” obtains for just about any piece of nonfiction prose. A basic reverse chronology helps to establish the premises or, more so, the steps—we start with the effects (people talking and putting out flags) and move to the cause (the planes hitting the twin towers). Better to begin with resilience than catastrophe, perhaps, if you want to draw readers in and fortify them for what is probably the bleakest concluding line in all of Wallace’s nonfiction.

As for “connections,” Wallace refers to them as “transitions,” and he goes on to say that “the reader needs help understanding how two sentences are connected to each other—and [the reader] also [needs help understanding] transitions [or connections] between paragraphs” (83). If we take the first moment of heightened emotion and parse if for “connections,” what do we see? We see that the paragraph that it’s in begins with a clear transition—“The point being that on Wednesday here ...”—and that it has another prominent transition to set up the Pakistani proprietor’s offer of a seat in his stock room: “Until in one of the Horror’s weird twists of fate and circumstance.” It’s worth noting the prominence of these key connections: at the start of a paragraph and after the only ellipsis mark in the paragraph, near mid-point, as a visual signal for the move. Each transition helps the reader understand how this portion of the essay relates to the rest, just as Wallace says. And, of course, neither transition looks anything like a run-of-the-mill connection (“however,” “consequently,” etc.).

​Looking at the handwritten draft, we see that Wallace began by dashing off the events of Wednesday, the day after 9/11. At some point, he roughs out an opening just to the left of his first sentences; as well, he roughs out something like a structure above them. On the whole, the handwritten draft is largely objective—that is, it’s focused mostly on noting what’s going on the day after 9/11 and on 9/11 itself, the things Wallace has overheard or seen. The typescript, on the other hand, is largely subjective. It allows Wallace to go deeply inside his own head and posit himself as an especially attenuated witness and point of view. “The View from Mrs. Thompson’s” isn’t so much “the view,” of course, as it is Wallace’s view. In the typescript, Wallace repeatedly finds ways to harness his keen awareness of self in service to the story. It’s a fiction writer’s move, in part: making a potentially unlikable narrator sympathetic. It’s also a move that cutting edge journalists like Joan Didion had mastered some 35 years before “The View from Mrs. Thompson’s.” Arguably, it’s Wallace’s style, rather than his approach, that’s fresh, though where one ends and the other begins is fairly porous. Even so, Wallace’s ability to do a lot with a little data may be without equal.


End Notes

[1] For background information on how the Ransom Center acquired the Wallace archive, see Megan Barnard, who notes that HRC had its “first glimpse into Wallace’s creative process in 2005 with [its] acquisition of the papers of Don DeLillo,” with whom Wallace had a lively correspondence. Barnard goes on to note that “Wallace’s letters [to DeLillo] show a writer who was deliberate, funny, and often uncertain, but most clearly, they show a writer who took painstaking care with his art.” For an overview of the kinds of papers the archive carries, see Meredith Blake, who describes how “Wallace’s widow, Karen Green, and Bonnie Nadell, his long-time literary agent” assembled the Wallace materials “from the mess of papers he had stashed in a dark garage overrun with spiders.”

[2] Rolling Stone’s title for the piece it printed in 2001 was “The View from Mrs. Thompson’s,” but for some reason the magazine changed the title a decade later, when it posted it to its website as “9/11: The View from the Midwest.” It might also be worth remarking that the photograph the website carries doesn’t quite work: while the photo shows an image of a house bearing a large flag, the flag is draped across a rustic-looking cabin in Maine, not a house on the prairie in the Midwest. I can’t imagine Wallace would be pleased.


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Michael W. Cox teaches creative and professional writing at the University of Pittsburgh at Johnstown.  His scholarship has appeared in Midwest Quarterly, South Asian Review, and Explicator.  His nonfiction has appeared in New Letters, Sport Literate, River Teeth, Kestrel, the New York Times Magazine, Best American Essays, and the Touchstone Anthology of Contemporary Creative Nonfiction.  His novel The Best Way to Get Even was recently published by MAMMOTH books.



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        • Heath Diehl, "​The Photo Essay: The Search for Meaning" (3.1)
        • Sonya Huber, "​James Baldwin: Nonfiction of a Native Son" (3.1)
        • Christian Exoo, "Using CNF to Teach the Realities of ​Intimate Partner Violence to First Responders: An Annotated Bibliography" (3.1)
        • John Proctor, "Teachin’ BAE: A New Reclamation of Research and Critical Thought" (3.1)
        • Richard Gilbert, "Classics Lite: On Teaching the Shorter, Magazine Versions of James Baldwin's 'Notes of a Native Son' and ​Jonathan Lethem's 'The Beards'" (3.1)
        • Dawn Duncan & Micaela Gerhardt, "The Power of Words to Build Bridges of Empathy" (3.1)
    • 3.2 (Spring 2017) >
      • 3.2 Articles >
        • Jennifer Lang, "When Worlds Collide: ​Writers Exploring Their Personal Narrative in Context" (3.2)
        • Creighton Nicholas Brown, "Educational Archipelago: Alternative Knowledges and the Production of Docile Bodies in Jamaica Kincaid’s A Small Place and Marjane Satrapi’s The Complete Persepolis" (3.2)
        • Nicola Waldron, "Containing the Chaos: On Spiral Structure and the Creation of Ironic Distance in Memoir" (3.2)
        • Charles Green, "Remaking Relations: ​Reading Ta-Nehisi Coates Beyond James Baldwin" (3.2)
        • Joey Franklin, "Facts into Truths: Henry David Thoreau and the Role of Hard Facts in ​Creative Nonfiction" (3.2)
      • 3.2 Conversations >
        • Thomas Larson, "What I Am Not Yet, I Am" (3.2)
        • Amanda Ake, "Vulnerability and the Page: Chloe Caldwell’s I’ll Tell You In Person"​ (3.2)
        • "Interview with Gail Griffin" (3.2)
        • Alysia Sawchyn, "On Best American Essays 1989" (3.2)
      • 3.2 Pedagogy >
        • D. Shane Combs, "Go Craft Yourself: Conflict, Meaning, and Immediacies Through ​J. Cole’s “Let Nas Down” (3.2)
        • Michael Ranellone, "Brothers, Keepers, Students: John Edgar Wideman Inside and Outside of Prison" (3.2)
        • Emma Howes & Christian Smith, ""You have to listen very hard”: Contemplative Reading, Lectio Divina, and ​Social Justice in the Classroom" (3.2)
        • Megan Brown, "The Beautiful Struggle: ​Teaching the Productivity of Failure in CNF Courses" (3.2)
    • 4.1 (Fall 2017) >
      • Editor's Note
      • 4.1 Articles >
        • Jennifer Case, "Place Studies: Theory and Practice in Environmental Nonfiction"
        • Bob Cowser, Jr., "Soldiers, Home: Genre & the American Postwar Story from Hemingway to O'Brien & then Wolff"
        • Sam Chiarelli, "Audience as Participant: The Role of Personal Perspective in Contemporary Nature Writing"
        • Kate Dusto, "Reconstructing Blank Spots and Smudges: How Postmodern Moves Imitate Memory in Mary Karr's The Liars' Club"
        • Joanna Eleftheriou, "Is Genre Ever New? Theorizing the Lyric Essay in its Historical Context"
        • Harriet Hustis, ""The Only Survival, The Only Meaning": ​The Structural Integrity of Thornton Wilder's Bridge in John Hersey's Hiroshima"
      • 4.1 Conversations >
        • Taylor Brorby, "​On 'Dawn and Mary'"
        • Steven Harvey, "​From 'Leap'"
        • J. Drew Lanham, "​On 'Joyas Voladoras'"
        • Patrick Madden, "On 'His Last Game'"
        • Ana Maria Spagna, "On 'How We Wrestle is Who We Are'"
      • 4.1 Pedagogy >
        • Jacqueline Doyle, "Shuffling the Cards: ​I Think Back Through Judith Ortiz Cofer"
        • Amy E. Robillard, "Children Die No Matter How Hard We Try: What the Personal Essay Teaches Us About Reading"
    • 4.2 (Spring 2018) >
      • 4.2 Articles >
        • Megan Brown, "Testimonies, Investigations, and Meditations: ​Telling Tales of Violence in Memoir"
        • Corinna Cook, "Documentation and Myth: On Daniel Janke's How People Got Fire"
        • Michael W. Cox, "Privileging the Sentence: David Foster Wallace’s Writing Process for “The View from Mrs. Thompson’s”
        • Sarah Pape, "“Artistically Seeing”: Visual Art & the Gestures of Creative Nonfiction"
        • Annie Penfield, "Moving Towards What is Alive: ​The Power of the Sentence to Transform"
        • Keri Stevenson, "Partnership, Not Dominion: ​Resistance to Decay in the Falconry Memoir"
      • 4.2 Conversations >
        • Interview with Jericho Parms (4.2)
        • "Containing the Hidden Lives of Ordinary Things: A Conversation with Seven Authors"
        • Amy Monticello, "The New Greek Chorus: Collective Characters in Creative Nonfiction"
        • Stacy Murison, "David Foster Wallace's 'Ticket to the Fair'"
        • Emery Ross, "Toward a Craft of Disclosure: Risk, Shame, & Confession in the Harrowing Essay"
      • 4.2 Pedagogy >
        • Sonya Huber, "Field Notes for a Vulnerable & Immersed Narrator" (4.2)
        • W. Scott Olsen, "In Other Words" (4.2)
    • 5.1 (Fall 2018) >
      • 5.1 Articles >
        • Emily W. Blacker, "Ending the Endless: The Art of Ending Personal Essays" (5.1)
        • Marya Hornbacher, ""The World is Not Vague": Nonfiction and the Urgency of Fact" (5.1)
        • Rachel May, "The Pen and the Needle: ​ Intersections of Text and Textile in and as Nonfiction" (5.1)
        • Jen Soriano, "Multiplicity from the Margins: The Expansive Truth of Intersectional Form" (5.1)
      • 5.1 Conversations >
        • Matthew Ferrence, "In Praise of In Praise of Shadows: Toward a Structure of Reverse Momentum" (5.1)
        • John Proctor, "Nothing Out of Something: Diagramming Sentences of Oppression" (5.1)
        • Alysia Sawchyn, "Essaying the World: ​On Tell Me How It Ends: An Essay in Forty Questions" (5.1)
        • Vivian Wagner, "Crafting Digression: Interactivity and Gamification in Creative Nonfiction" (5.1)
        • Nicole Walker, "On Beauty" (5.1)
      • 5.1 Spotlight >
        • Philip Graham, "The Shadow Knows (5.1)
        • Miles Harvey, "The Two Inmates: ​Research in Creative Nonfiction and the Power of “Outer Feeling”" (5.1)
        • Tim Hillegonds, "Making Fresh" (5.1)
        • Michele Morano, "Creating Meaning Through Structure" (5.1)
      • 5.1 Pedagogy >
        • Meghan Buckley, "[Creative] Nonfiction Novella: Teaching Postcolonial Life Writing and the ​Hybrid Genre of Jamaica Kincaid’s A Small Place" (5.1)
        • Edvige Giunta, "Memoir as Cross-Cultural Practice in Italian American Studies" (5.1)
        • Jody Keisner, "Gender Identity in Personal Writing: Contextualizing the Syllabi" (5.1)
        • Terry Ann Thaxton, "Workshop Wild" (5.1)
        • Amanda Wray, "​Contesting Traditions: Oral History in Creative Writing Pedagogy" (5.1)
    • 5.2 (Spring 2019) >
      • 5.2 Articles >
        • Nina Boutsikaris, "On Very Short Books, Miniatures, and Other Becomings" (5.2)
        • Kay Sohini, "The Graphic Memoir as a Transitional Object: ​ Narrativizing the Self in Alison Bechdel’s Are You My Mother?" (5.2)
        • Kelly Weber, ""We are the Poem": Structural Fissures and Levels in ​Lidia Yuknavitch’s The Chronology of Water" (5.2)
      • 5.2 Conversations >
        • Sam Cha, "​Unbearable Splendor: Against "Hybrid" Genre; Against Genre" (5.2)
        • Rachel Cochran, "Infection in “The Hour of Freedom”: Containment and Contamination in Philip Kennicott’s “Smuggler”" (5.2)
        • Katharine Coles, "​If a Body" (5.2)
        • A.M. Larks, "Still Playing the Girl" (5.2)
      • 5.2 Spotlight >
        • Charles Green, "In Praise of Navel Gazing: An Ars Umbilica" (5.2)
        • Sarah Kruse, "​The Essay: Landscape, Failure, and Ordinary’s Other" (5.2)
        • Desirae Matherly, "Something More Than This" (5.2)
        • Susan Olding, "Unruly Pupil" (5.2)
        • Jane Silcott, "Essaying Vanity" (5.2)
      • 5.2 Tribute to Louise DeSalvo >
        • Julija Sukys, "One Mother to Another: Remembering Louise DeSalvo (1942—2018)" (5.2)
        • Nancy Caronia and Edvige Giunta, "The Essential Louise DeSalvo Reading List" (5.2)
        • Nancy Caronia and Edvige Giunta, "From the Personal Edge: Beginning to Remember Louise DeSalvo" (5.2)
        • Richard Hoffman, "DeSalvo Tribute, IAM Books, Boston" (5.2)
        • Peter Covino, "Getting It Right – Homage for Louise DeSalvo" (5.2)
        • Mary Jo Bona, "Pedagogy of the Liberated and Louise DeSalvo’s Gifts" (5.2)
        • Joshua Fausty, "The Shared Richness of Life Itself" (5.2)
      • 5.2 Pedagogy >
        • Ashley Anderson, "Teaching Experimental Structures through Objects and ​John McPhee’s 'The Search for Marvin Gardens'" (5.2)
        • Trisha Brady, "Negotiating Linguistic Borderlands, Valuing Linguistic Diversity, and Incorporating Border Pedagogy in a College Composition Classroom" (5.2)
        • Kim Hensley Owens, "Writing Health and Disability: Two Problem-Based Composition Assignments" (5.2)
        • Reshmi Mukherjee, "Threads: From the Refugee Crisis: Creative Nonfiction and Critical Pedagogy" (5.2)
        • Susan M. Stabile, "Architectures of Revision" (5.2)
    • 6.1 (Fall 2019) >
      • 6.1 Articles >
        • Lynn Z. Bloom, "The Slippery Slope: ​Ideals and Ethical Issues in High Altitude Climbing Narratives" (6.1)
        • Tanya Bomsta, "The Performance of Epistemic Agency of the ​Autobiographical Subject in Terry Tempest Williams’s When Women Were Birds: Fifty-four Variations on Voice" (6.1)
        • Lorna Hummel, "Querying and Queering Caregiving: Reading Bodies Othered by Illness via Porochista Khakpour’s Sick: A Memoir" (6.1)
        • Laura Valeri, "Tell Tale Interviews: Lessons in True-Life Trauma Narratives Gleaned from ​Jennifer Fox’s The Tale" (6.1)
        • Arianne Zwartjes​, "Under the Skin: An Exploration of Autotheory" (6.1)
      • 6.1 Conversations >
        • Tracy Floreani, "​"Sewing and Telling": On Textile as Story" (6.1)
        • Tessa Fontaine, "The Limits of Perception: Trust Techniques in Nonfiction" (6.1)
        • Patrick Madden, "​Once More to 'His Last Game'" (6.1) >
          • Brian Doyle, "Twice More to the Lake" (6.1)
        • Randon Billings Noble, "The Sitting" (6.1)
        • Donna Steiner, "Serving Size: On Hunger and Delight" (6.1)
        • Natalie Villacorta, "Autofiction: Rightly Shaped for Woman’s Use" (6.1)
      • 6.1 Tribute to Ned Stuckey-French >
        • Marcia Aldrich, "The Book Reviewer" (6.1)
        • Bob Cowser, "Meeting Bobby Kennedy" (6.1)
        • Sonya Huber, "Working and Trying" (6.1)
        • Carl H. Klaus, "On Ned Stuckey-French and Essayists on the Essay" (6.1)
        • Robert Root, "On The American Essay in the American Century" (6.1)
      • 6.1 Pedagogy >
        • John Currie, "​The Naïve Narrator in Student-Authored Environmental Writing" (6.1)
        • Steven Harvey, "The Humble Essayist's Paragraph of the Week: A Discipline of the Heart and Mind" (6.1)
        • Reagan Nail Henderson, "Make Me Care!: Creating Digital Narratives in the Composition Classroom" (6.1)
        • Abriana Jetté, "Making Meaning: Authority, Authorship, and the Introduction to Creative Writing Syllabus" (6.1)
        • Jessie Male, "Teaching Lucy Grealy’s “Mirrorings” and the Importance of Disability Studies Pedagogy in Composition Classrooms" (6.1)
        • Wendy Ryden, "Liminally True: Creative Nonfiction as Transformative Thirdspace" (6.1)
    • 6.2 (Spring 2020) >
      • Guest Editor's Note to the Special Issue
      • 6.2 Articles >
        • Maral Aktokmakyan, "Revisioning Gendered Reality in ​Armenian Women’s Life Writing of the Post-Genocidal Era: Zaruhi Kalemkearian’s From the Path of My Life"
        • Manisha Basu, "Regimes of Reality: ​Of Contemporary Indian Nonfiction and its Free Men"
        • Stefanie El Madawi, "Telling Tales: Bearing Witness in Jennifer Fox’s The Tale"
        • Inna Sukhenko and Anastasia Ulanowicz, "Narrative, Nonfiction, and the Nuclear Other: Western Representations of Chernobyl in the Works of Adam Higginbotham, Serhii Plokhy, and Kate Brown"
      • 6.2 Conversations >
        • Leonora Anyango-Kivuva, "Daughter(s) of Rubanga: An Author, a Student, and Other Stories in Between"
        • Victoria Brown, "How We Write When We Write About Life: Caribbean Nonfiction Resisting the Voyeur"
        • David Griffith, "Wrecking the Disimagination Machine"
        • Stacey Waite, "Coming Out With the Truth"
      • Tribute to Michael Steinberg >
        • Jessica Handler, "Notes on Mike Steinberg"
        • Joe Mackall, "Remembering Mike Steinberg: On the Diamond and at the Desk"
        • Laura Julier, "Making Space"
      • 6.2 Pedagogy >
        • Jens Lloyd, "Truthful Inadequacies: Teaching the Rhetorical Spark of Bashō’s Travel Sketches"
        • George H. Jensen, "Situating Scenes: Cheryl Strayed’s “The Love of My Life”
        • Gregory Stephens, "Footnotes from the ‘Margins’: Outcomes-based Literary Nonfiction Pedagogy in Puerto Rico"
    • 7.1 (Fall 2020) >
      • 7.1 Articles >
        • Jo-Anne Berelowitz, "Mourning and Melancholia in Memoir" (Assay 7.1)
        • Carlos Cunha, "On the Chronicle" (Assay 7.1)
        • August Owens Grimm, "Haunted Memoir" (Assay 7.1)
        • Colleen Hennessy, "Irish Motherhood in Irish Nonfiction: Abortion and Agency" (Assay 7.1)
        • James Perrin Warren, "Underland: Reading with Robert Macfarlane" (Assay 7.1)
      • 7.1 Conversations >
        • Alex Brostoff, ""What are we going to do with our proximity, baby!?" ​ A Reply in Multiples of The Hundreds" (Assay 7.1)
        • Steven Harvey, "Lyric Memory: A Guide to the Mnemonics of Nonfiction" (Assay 7.1)
        • Lisa Low, "Proleptic Strategies in Race-Based Essays: Jordan K. Thomas, Rita Banerjee, and Durga Chew-Bose" (Assay 7.1)
        • Nicole Walker, "The Concrete Poetry of Ander Monson’s Essays" (Assay 7.1)
      • 7.1 Pedagogy >
        • Audrey T. Heffers, "Positionality and Experience in the Creative Nonfiction Classroom" (Assay 7.1)
        • James McAdams, "Ars Poetica, Ars Media, Ars COVID-19: Creative Writing in the Medical Classroom" (Assay 7.1)
        • Freesia McKee, "Feedback as Fan Letter" (Assay 7.1)
        • Tonee Mae Moll, "Teaching and Writing True Stories Through ​Feminist, Womanist and Black Feminist Epistemologies" (Assay 7.1)
        • Jill Stukenberg, "“Inspiration in the Drop of Ink”: Scholarship of Teaching and Learning Observations in Introduction to Creative Writing" (Assay 7.1)
    • 7.2 (Spring 2021) >
      • 7.2 Articles >
        • Whitney Brown, "Melting Ice and Disappointing Whale Hunts: A Climate-Focused Review of Contemporary Travel Writing" (Assay 7.2)
        • George Estreich, "Ross Gay’s Logics of Delight" (Assay 7.2)
        • Wes Jamison, "'You Are Absent': The Pronoun of Address in Nonfiction" (Assay 7.2)
        • Zachary Ostraff, "The Lyric Essay as a Form of Counterpoetics" (Assay 7.2)
        • Kara Zivin, "Interrogating Patterns: Meandering, Spiraling, and Exploding through ​The Two Kinds of Decay" (Assay 7.2)
      • 7.2 Conversations >
        • Sarah Minor
        • David Shields
      • 7.2 Pedagogy >
        • Megan Baxter, "On Teaching Brian Doyle’s “Leap” to Students Born After 9/11" (Assay 7.2)
        • Jennifer Case, "'Toward a New, Broader Perspective': Place-Based Pedagogy and the Narrative Interview"
        • Kelly K. Ferguson, "Cribbing Palpatine’s Syllabus: Or, What Professoring for the Evil Empire Taught Me ​About Instructional Design" (Assay 7.2)
        • Jennifer Pullen, "Seeking Joy in the Classroom: Nature Writing in 2020" (Assay 7.2)
    • 8.1 (Fall 2021) >
      • 8.1 Articles >
        • Allison Ellis, "Nonfiction Ghost Hunting" (Assay 8.1)
        • Lisa Levy, "We Are All Modern: Exploring the Vagaries of Consciousness in 20th & 21st Century Biography and Life Writing" (Assay 8.1)
        • Ashley Espinoza, "A las Mujeres: Hybrid Identities in Latina Memoir" (Assay 8.1)
        • Cherie Nelson, "The Slippery Self: Intertextuality in Lauren Slater’s Lying" (Assay 8.1)
        • Amie Souza Reilly, "Reading the Gaps: On Women’s Nonfiction and Page Space" (Assay 8.1)
      • 8.1 Conversations >
        • Amy Bowers, "The Elegiac Chalkboard in Jo Ann Beard’s “The Fourth State of Matter”" (Assay 8.1)
        • Theresa Goenner, "​The Mania of Language: Robert Vivian's Dervish Essay" (Assay 8.1)
        • Kathryn Nuernberger, "Writing Women’s Histories" (Assay 8.1)
        • Louisa McCullough, "The Case for In-Person Conversation" (Assay 8.1)
        • Kat Moore, "Rupture in Time (and Language): Hybridity in Kathy Acker’s Essays" (Assay 8.1)
      • 8.1 Pedagogy >
        • Mike Catron, "There’s No Such Thing as Too Much of Jason Sheehan’s “There’s No Such Thing As Too Much Barbecue”: ​A Pedagogical Discussion" (Assay 8.1)
        • Brooke Covington, "Ars Media: A Toolkit for Narrative Medicine in Writing Classrooms" (Assay 8.1)
        • W. Scott Olsen, "​A Desire for Stories" (Assay 8.1)
        • C.S. Weisenthal, "​Seed Stories: Pitched into the Digital Archive" (Assay 8.1)
    • 8.2 (Spring 2022) >
      • 8.2 Articles >
        • Barrie Jean Borich, "Radical Surprise: The Subversive Art of the Uncertain," (8.2)
        • George Estreich, "Feeling Seen: Blind Man’s Bluff, Memoir, and the Sighted Reader" (8.2)
        • Kristina Gaddy, "When Action is Too Much and Not Enough: A Study of Mode in Narrative Journalism" (8.2)
        • Marya Hornbacher, "Solitude Narratives: Towards a Future of the Form" (8.2)
        • Margot Kotler, "Susan Sontag, Lorraine Hansberry, and the ​Politics of Queer Biography " (8.2)
      • 8.2 Conversations >
        • Michael W. Cox , "On Two Published Versions of Joan Didion’s “Marrying Absurd” (8.2)
        • Hugh Martin, "No Cheap Realizations: On Kathryn Rhett’s “Confinements” (8.2)
      • 8.2 Pedagogy >
        • Liesel Hamilton, "How I Wish I’d Taught Frederick Douglass: An Examination of the Books and Conversations We Have in Classrooms" (8.2)
        • Audrey T. Heffers, "In the Room Where it Happens: Accessibility, Equity, and the Creative Writing Classroom" (8.2)
        • Daniel Nester, "Joan Didion and Aldous Huxley’s Three Poles" (8.2)
    • 9.1 (Fall 2022) >
      • 9.1 Articles >
        • Mark Houston, "Riding Out of Abstraction: Robin Wall Kimmerer’s Re-materialization of ​Social Justice Rhetoric in “The Sacred and the Superfund”" (9.1)
        • Ryan McIlvain, ""You Get to Decide What to Worship but Not What's Good": Rereading 'This Is Water'" (9.1)
        • Quincy Gray McMichael, "Laboring toward Leisure: The Characterization of Work in ​Maine’s Back-to-the-Land Memoirs" (9.1)
        • Aggie Stewart, "Bringing Dark Events to Light: ​Emotional Pacing in the Trauma Narrative" (9.1)
        • Emma Winsor Wood, "A Lovely Woman Tapers Off into a Fish: Monstrosity in Montaigne’s Essais" (9.1)
      • 9.1 Conversations >
        • Philip Newman Lawton, "Rousseau's Wandering Mind" (9.1)
        • Claire Salinda, "Bodily Dissociation as a Female Coping Mechanism in ​The Shapeless Unease, Ongoingness: The End of a Diary, and Girlhood" (9.1)
        • Hannah White, "“Which sounds bad and maybe was”: A Study of Narrative in Beth Nguyen’s “Apparent”" (9.1)
      • 9.1 Pedagogy >
        • Jessica Handler, "Your Turn" (9.1)
        • Sonya Huber, "Expressing Anger as a Positive Choice" (9.1)
        • Kozbi Simmons, "Literacy as Emancipation" (9.1)
        • Wally Suphap, "Writing and Teaching the Polemic" (9.1)
    • 9.2 (Spring 2023) >
      • 9.2 Articles >
        • Brinson Leigh Kresge, "Repetition Development in the Lyric Essay" (Assay 9.2)
        • Amy Mackin, "A Structural History of American Public Health Narratives: Rereading Priscilla Wald’s Contagious and Nancy Tomes’ Gospel of Germs amidst a 21st-Century Pandemic" (Assay 9.2)
        • Jeannine Ouellette, "That Little Voice: The Outsized Power of a Child Narrator" (Assay 9.2)
        • Jennifer Lee Tsai, "The Figure of the Diseuse in Theresa Hak Kyung Cha's Dictee: Language, Breaking Silences and Irigarayan Mysticism" (Assay 9.2)
      • 9.2 Conversations >
        • Blossom D'Souza, "The Imagery of Nature in Rilke’s Letters to a Young Poet" (Assay 9.2)
        • Kyra Lisse, "Relentlist Women: On the Lists & Catalogs of Natalia Ginzburg & Annie Ernaux" (Assay 9.2)
        • William Kerwin,​ “Life as a Boneyard”: Art, History, and Ecology in One Tim Robinson Essay" (Assay 9.2)
        • Jill Kolongowski & Amy Monticello, "The Mundane as Maximalism of the Mind: Reclaiming the Quotidian" (Assay 9.2)
        • Eamonn Wall, "A Land Without Shortcuts: Tim Robinson and Máiréad Robinson" (Assay 9.2)
      • 9.2 Pedagogy >
        • Khem Aryal, "Beyond Lores: Linking Writers’ Self-Reports to Autoethnography" (Assay 9.2)
        • Jennifer Case, "Carework in the Creative Nonfiction Classroom: ​Toward a Trauma-Informed Pedagogy" (Assay 9.2)
        • Liesel Hamilton, "Creating Nonfiction Within and Against ​Nature and Climate Tropes" (Assay 9.2)
        • W. Scott Olsen, "Late Night Thoughts on What Street Photography ​Can Teach Us About Teaching Writing" (Assay 9.2)
    • 10.1 (Fall 2023) >
      • 10.1 Articles >
        • Ashley Anderson, "Give Them Space: ​Memoir as a Site for Processing Readers’ Grief" (Assay 10.1)
        • Anne Garwig, "Hervey Allen’s Toward the Flame, Illustration, and the ​Legacy of Collective Memory of the First World War" (Assay 10.1)
        • Marya Hornbacher, "All We Do Not Say: The Art of Leaving Out" (Assay 10.1)
        • Kathryn Jones, "Conveying the Grief Experience: Joan Didion’s Use of Lists in The Year of Magical Thinking and Blue Nights" (Assay 10.1)
        • Erin Fogarty Owen, "How to Write Well About Death" (Assay 10.1)
      • 10.1 Conversations >
        • Beth Kephart, "On Reading Fast and Reading Slow" (Assay 10.1)
        • Mimi Schwartz, "The Power of Other Voices in Creative Nonfiction" (Assay 10.1)
      • 10.1 Pedagogy >
        • Angie Chuang, "Dear(ly) Departed: ​Letter-Writing to Engage the Issue of Racialized Police Brutality" (Assay 10.1)
        • Freesia McKee, "Where and How We Might Teach Hybrid: A Pedagogical Review of Kazim Ali’s Silver Road" (Assay 10.1)
    • 10.2 (Spring 2024) >
      • 10.2 Articles >
        • Lynn Z. Bloom, "Vanishing Points: Memoirs of Loss and Renewal "(Assay 10.2)
        • Lindsey Pharr, "Brave Person Drag": ​Identity, Consciousness, and the Power of the Cyclical in Gamebook-Formatted Memoir" (Assay 10.2)
      • 10.2 Conversations >
        • Marcia Aldrich, "On Difficulty" (Assay 10.2)
        • Thomas Larson, "Paraphrase, or Writer with Child" (Assay 10.2)
      • 10.2 Pedagogy >
        • Amy Bonnaffons, "Writing from the Big Brain: ​An Argument for Image and Process in Creative Writing Education" (Assay 10.2)
        • Micah McCrary, "Normalizing Creative Writing Scholarship in the Classroom" (Assay 10.2)
        • Candace Walsh, "The Braided Essay as Change Agent" (Assay 10.2)
    • 11.1 (Fall 2024) >
      • 11.1 Articles >
        • Anna Nguyen, "A Question on Genre: The Binary of the Creative/Theoretical Text in Elif Batuman’s The Possessed" (Assay 11.1)
        • Rachel N. Spear, "Saving Self and Others in Telling: Rhetoric, Stories, and Transformations" (Assay 11.1)
      • 11.1 Conversations >
        • Jehanne Dubrow, "The Essay's Volta" (Assay 11.1)
        • James Allen Hall, "Wholly Fragmented" (Assay 11.1)
      • 11.1 Spotlight >
        • Kim Hensley Owens & Yongzhi Miao, "Six Words is Enough: Memoirs for Assessment" (Assay 11.1)
        • Elizabeth Leahy, "Creating Space for Writing Tutor Vulnerability: Six-Word Memoirs in the Writing Center" (Assay 11.1)
        • Jennifer Stewart, "Six-Word Memoirs as Programmatic and Pedagogical Reflection" (Assay 11.1)
        • Katherine Fredlund, "Six Words Toward Knowing and Feeling" (Assay 11.1)
      • 11.1 Pedagogy >
        • Abby Manzella, "In Search of Delight (à la Ross Gay) at the Art Museum: ​A Writing Exercise with Pen in Hand" (Assay 11.1)
        • Peter Wayne Moe, "Grocery Shopping with Leonardo DiCaprio: On Time, Routines, & Writing" (Assay 11.1)
        • Gwen Niekamp, "The Case for Situating Olaudah Equiano’s Interesting Narrative ​in the CNF Classroom and Canon" (Assay 11.1)
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